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A Life

January 21, 2010
By MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments

Tones of admiration
Eyes of adoration
Words of animation
Look of aspiration

Hours of education
Plenty of elevation
Bundles of expectation
Surplus of emulation

Surge of desperation
Rush of devastation
Lack of domination
Loss of dedication



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on Sep. 23 2010 at 9:56 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments

It didn't take you that long, considering how many pieces you've had to go through. I'm still amazed you had the energy for it.

Thank you so much!


AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 23 2010 at 8:32 am
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

The good:  I really like this!  It was somehow deep without being heavy, which was nice.  I love the way you grouped the words. Good job!

The bad: Looks good to me!

The random: Sorry it has taken me so long to get to your stuff...



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