Terrible

January 21, 2010
By MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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Breaking toys
Making noise
Forgetting about all the joys

Temper watch
Perfect botch
The dial's turning one more notch

It's time-out
Scream and shout
Save strength for the on-coming bout

Tantrums come
Hitting home
Reverberating in the dome

Now asleep
Not a peep
No sign of what was once a creep


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on Apr. 9 2010 at 9:25 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

I am absolutely in love with the rhyme scheme you used!! Its so well written :o

my favorite line is "the dials turning one more notch" lol idk why, I just love it :D



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