Finally

January 19, 2010
By Keelin2010 SILVER, Mt. Shasta, California
Keelin2010 SILVER, Mt. Shasta, California
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."


It’s something indescribable
Not even these words can capture it
The feeling of being with him
A weight has been lifted off my chest
I’m upbeat once more
And my smile is real at last
My happiness is no longer a façade
I can finally act like myself
There are no more cover ups
No more lying about being fine
He pulled me up from the depths
Caught me as I was falling
Made me feel like I am worth something
Like he’d waste his time on me any day
There’s a sense that someone truly cares
All my days have been brightened
I now have a shield from the darkness
The nightmares have disappeared
I can finally sleep at night
I am actually content with my life
And I hope this feeling continues eternally


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on Mar. 22 2010 at 7:42 pm
Keelin2010 SILVER, Mt. Shasta, California
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

id love to read them! what are the titles so i know what im looking for?

on Mar. 21 2010 at 7:24 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

thankk uu!!! xD

i have 2 poemz pending approval & it

would mean alott if u get a chance 2

read em when they come on :p

on Mar. 18 2010 at 10:41 pm
Keelin2010 SILVER, Mt. Shasta, California
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

Thank you! i love the feedback. your work is extremely good too! i love reading the short stories. You bring out emotions in them very well.

on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:35 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

aww this is soo cutee!

i luvv it. awesome job. u can really

feel wht the narrator feelz.

plz keep writing!! <3


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