January 19, 2010
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It’s something indescribable
Not even these words can capture it
The feeling of being with him
A weight has been lifted off my chest
I’m upbeat once more
And my smile is real at last
My happiness is no longer a façade
I can finally act like myself
There are no more cover ups
No more lying about being fine
He pulled me up from the depths
Caught me as I was falling
Made me feel like I am worth something
Like he’d waste his time on me any day
There’s a sense that someone truly cares
All my days have been brightened
I now have a shield from the darkness
The nightmares have disappeared
I can finally sleep at night
I am actually content with my life
And I hope this feeling continues eternally

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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:35 pm
aww this is soo cutee!
i luvv it. awesome job. u can really
feel wht the narrator feelz.
plz keep writing!! <3
Keelin2010 replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 10:41 pm
Thank you! i love the feedback. your work is extremely good too! i love reading the short stories. You bring out emotions in them very well.
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 7:24 pm
thankk uu!!! xD
i have 2 poemz pending approval & it
would mean alott if u get a chance 2
read em when they come on :p
Keelin2010 replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 7:42 pm
id love to read them! what are the titles so i know what im looking for?
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