Broken

January 14, 2010
By CortaduraChica PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
CortaduraChica PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You love to hate the one who loves the one you hate to love.
"LSHIFOMD JKIDHAD BIIDINHW"


I'm broken in two,
And yes its by you,
It's because of me,
I was to stupid to see,
You didn't want to break my heart,
But now it is all torn apart,
I wish you would just tell me the answer now,
So i can slowly start to get over you somehow,
I know i'll cry lots of tears,
And hope that noone ever hears.

The author's comments:
relationships are really hard when you are a teenager.

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on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:08 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

I like this one a lot. You should work on your capitalization though. And maybe put periods in certain spots instead of commas, but overall very good job.


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