Love Is a Train Wreck MAG

January 26, 2010
By Angelo Sauter BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, North Carolina
Angelo Sauter BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, North Carolina
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Love is a train wreck,
wasting time and lives.
Carnage on the tracks.
Brace yourself for
emotional malfunction.
Loose screws,
tension tightens
until it breaks like a
fork in the track.
Love:
people board and exit.
Betrayed,
you derail to your
final destination.



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Ms. Costar said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:47 pm
Angelo, I really enjoyed reading your poem...you are a talented writer. Keep up the good work!!!

necessary said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 12:59 pm
you're so funny!

maryjean9 said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:41 pm
I am sorry about mistaking the author. I apologize to Angelo. :-)

Mrs. N said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:34 pm
Dallas didn't write this, Angelo did :)

maryjean9 said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 4:11 pm
I love this poem. I would like to read more. Way to go, Dallas!

Stalvey said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:08 am
Who would have ever known you had a poetic side to you. Totally amazing!!!

LeslieMoore said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:23 am
This poem is evocative and thoughtful. I am impressed!

DRD-FMS said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:41 am
This is great! Keep writing.

Vega-Leon said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:28 am
opps not ESPANOL Vega-Leon very well done. Keep it up.

ESPANOL said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:23 am
Excelente muy bien hecho

Polito said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:10 am
Great job! Loved your diction! P Polito

Mrs. Barrow said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:01 am
Wow! You really have a gift Angelo. I can't wait to see more of your work. Keep it up.

on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:48 am
So proud of you Angelo! I hope you keep writing!

huchimama said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 1:49 pm
I loved the poem and thought it was very deep for one so young.

on Jan. 27 2010 at 11:01 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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