Heart on Fire

January 15, 2010
By StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."


My heart is on fire
My soul is alight
My conscience is burning
My brain is out of site
My lips are blazing
My eyes are aflame
My skin is simmering
I cannot be tamed
Try as you might to calm me down
Say that you need me
Plead on the ground
But whatever you do there's one thing you can't say
Don't ever claim that I'll need you someday



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on Mar. 9 2011 at 8:26 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

wow. 5 stars..thats really all i can say. my favorite is the last two lines:)) very strong

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 9:38 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

I'm giving this four stars because it seems your forcing the rhyme instead of letting it come naturally. I like the premise of the poem. Good job!

on May. 30 2010 at 10:04 am
crazyforchrist GOLD, Sidney, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
1 timothy 4:12 Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in life, in love, in faith and in purity.

I love the imagery in this. I understand the emotion in this. Very well written.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 6:42 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

This is fantastic! I really like the rhyme and how your poem flows so well, and the last line is delivered so amazingly - it's like a whack where it hurts the most.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:16 pm
hyperactivemayfly PLATINUM, Arlington Heights, Illinois
29 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Un ange frappe a ma porte
Est-ce que je le laisse entrer
Ce n'est pas toujours ma faute
Si les choses sont cassées
Le diable frappe a ma porte
Il demande a me parler
Il y a en moi toujours l'autre
Attiré par le danger"

Hey, you commented on my article (death in suburbia) but I never check the comments, so I just found that you asked me to check this out and I did and I love it!! Check out more of my work, 'k? And I'll check yours out and rate it and maybe we'll both get published ;)

on Feb. 12 2010 at 4:51 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

wow, this poem is amazing! great job!




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