January 9, 2010
Blackness surrounds the earth
Dipping it into a pit of tar
Wherever you look the night goes as far
It skims the ocean
It brushes the sky
Why does it do this?
I don't know why
Even though in the dark we cannot see
I know that you are always standing next to me

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Mikaela said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 7:38 pm

It's very interesting how you said night is like dipping the earth into a pit of tar, when I, personally, would have used a more... sweeter way to describe it.

I like seeing different styles, though!

hyperactivemayfly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 6:20 pm
Awww! It's so sweet!
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