And the Angel said...

December 22, 2009
By MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse


“You are the light of my eyes…” Stop! How can this be? I sit here on this cold ground and I stare at my thoughts. Pondering, why does this keep happening to me? How could such a thing occur in one’s life? I watch you walk by…every day with that cretinous smirk on your beautiful face. Shrouded with pain. This isn’t a dream, just a nightmare I fear. Only in a past life, would I lay in a field of white roses, enclosed by your scent. Wisps of wind tickle my nose, a smile on blissful face. “Angel, you are my life.” Filled with undying light. Darkness crept in with every soothing word. How could I be so blind to believe in promises that were nothing but lies? Once filled with warmth and safety, now a frigid interior. Blood replaced by a liquid more dense than lead. Shallow breaths escape my frost-bitten lips…the ones you kissed. My heart slipped through the huge gaps between your fingers. Landing in an ocean full of ice. I suppose my love was nothing but a hoax. I wasn’t enough for you. Forever was shorter than I imagined…

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Just something I wrote a while ago...

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on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:26 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Thanks! :)

on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:08 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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Amazing poem I especially liked the last few lines keep on writing!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:54 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Thanks a bunch :)

on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:33 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Well good luck. Ill keep looking 4 your writing!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 5:33 am
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Very true :)

on Feb. 7 2010 at 10:04 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Well, you can be both. I want 2 b a doctor and an author. You can write in your free time or publish science journals. You can put them both together or work on each seperately. It doesn't matter, as long as you do wat u luv!!!!

on Feb. 7 2010 at 11:14 am
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Yea, you're right. But i can't tell what I want to do. I want to write but I also want to be a neurosurgeon. Tough decision!

on Feb. 7 2010 at 9:37 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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You're welcome! Keep writing-I can tell you have a passion 4 it and I think that you should keep pushing to write. You can make it far if you try hard enough.

on Feb. 6 2010 at 8:30 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Thank you so much!! :)

on Feb. 6 2010 at 7:45 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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AWESOME. So awesome. I was just looking for something to read and then I found a comment you had written. Just by the way you commented I could tell you were a poet. So then I read this and i was like....WOAH. It's so good. I kno im the 1st 2 comment on this but dont lose faith-you really have a talent here.




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