Autumn Dreams

January 5, 2010
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Autumnal colours blend gold to brown,
Mythical creatures see rose in the thorn.
Dreaming of forests, and far reaching lands,
Storybook characters, movement of hands

Seeking for more, at quickening pace,
Bus wheels move faster, the passenger’s race,
Out of control, whilst wishing to find
A fairy tale ending; An ethereal kind.

Ephemeral fantasies lighten the shroud,
Yet still without answers - Wishing aloud.
More candled cakes, each candle in vain,
Embers rekindled, extinguished by rain

Angel in your eyes, such visions transpire,
Sunlight exposes each flawless Vampire,
Tears fall freely, as memories arise,
Lifelong embraces, liberated cries.

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Skeezics said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 7:21 pm
Wow. This poem is awesome. I love the word choice. Great job.
Fredwardness said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 2:02 pm
That was really pretty. I like how you used some larger words that most people woudn't put in their writing. It def. added to this. Overall good job.
Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 8:43 am
this is very polished. good job!
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