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America the Beautiful

America the beautiful
Is what I’d like to say
But then I think of all the morals
that have gone astray
I think of all the crime and murder we commit
And I think of all the war and many killed of it
I think of all the times that we’ve said we’d do our best
But in the end we always stop the quest
And I look at all this and what can I say
God bless America for we need it this day



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awesome_poet said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:21 am:
u could create a yahoomail account...it wont take long....or use one of mine...ill be online waitin 4 u to comment and let me know what u decide babe...
 
awesome_poet replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:23 am :
ooops...i meant to reply that to a comment...i messed up
 
peace_love_beauty replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 12:11 pm :
i dont think the school computers allow access to yahoo how about u get a blog at blogspot .com ?
 
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Jigjoo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 11:52 am:
Beautiful and poignant, but I would expect none less from the boyfriend of Andy. You should submit more. And more. And more. Until the halls of Teen Ink are drowned with your genius!
 
peace_love_beauty replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am :
Amen, sista!!!
 
awesome_poet replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:20 am :
haha! lol thax u 2....but, i never found out the story of y u call marilyn andy??? lol
 
peace_love_beauty replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:22 am :
she called me andy for short...lol cuz i am short
 
awesome_poet replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 11:41 am :
oh yeah i forgot
 
awesome_poet replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 11:51 am :
u gonna tell me the name of that blog site so we can talk??? or something
 
peace_love_beauty replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 12:14 pm :
blogspot .com mine is: www.madasahatter.blogspot .com
 
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peace_love_beauty said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 11:47 am:
Wow, this is so beautiful...you're a great poet, ya know...btw i can't get on my email becuase they blocked it but we can comment chat if ya want <3
 
awesome_poet replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:22 am :
u could create a yahoomail account...it wont take long....or use one of mine...ill be online waitin 4 u to comment and let me know what u decide babe...
 
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