Forgotten

December 17, 2009
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


Forgotten is how she came,
And forgotten she will leave.
She has never known a love that heals,
For she has known love at all.
She waited for you,
But you never came.
So she sat and cried,
Just because you lied.
But it wasn't your lie
That took her breath,
But you didn't love her,
That caused her death.
Before she passed on to another life,
She took a blade to handle her strife.
She needed that person she never found,
So in her blood, she has drowned.


The author's comments:
A lot of people go out and search for love and get hurt in the process. When thay feel like they've lost everthing thy wanted to find, they resort to depresseion, cutting, etc. But none of that is neccesary.

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on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:36 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Live for today, not for tomorrow

Your struggles have made you stronger and given you amazing insight which has enabled you to write such amazing poems. You help people Jess! :) 

on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:33 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Thank you.

on Aug. 7 2010 at 12:40 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Great writing - relatable but sad that cutting has become a common thing.  I love the lines "But it wasn't you lie that took her breath, but you didn't love her, that caused her death." Keep writing!

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:50 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Yeah, but it's a struggle that a lot of teens face.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:46 pm
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

cutting isn't necessary. very wonderful writing.

 


on May. 29 2010 at 7:03 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

because of your insight u write very well keep it up u could be of help to those people out there that feel this way!!

on Apr. 6 2010 at 6:04 pm
MedievalMouse94 SILVER, Toms River, New Jersey
8 articles 3 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart may heal with time, but even the smallest of wounds leaves a scar."

I like this one too. You're a very good wrighter....

on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:25 am
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
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"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

this is goood


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