I'm Such a Cute Cliche

January 7, 2010
By Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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As far as love goes,
I love you.
I hear it goes far, and
I hope that's true.
'Cause when I'm not around
and you're alone,
you'll be warm and happy
with my heart close.
So I'll never leave you,
'cause wherever you'll be,
my love'll stretch there,
across any sea.
My dearest darling,
I want you to know,
my love is yours now, and
I'll never go.
My sweetest honey,
I want you to see,
my devotion's yours forever,
however long that may be.


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on Jan. 18 2010 at 2:04 am
SolvoAnimus BRONZE, Jamaica, New York
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not bad...as a matter of fact...VERY GOOD!

on Jan. 16 2010 at 6:40 pm
LittlePoemWriter SILVER, Little Chute, Wisconsin
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i loved it =]

on Jan. 16 2010 at 2:13 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is cute and really well written. It's simple, but has a really strong emotion. Great job!

cass said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:17 am
this is so beautiful and cute! Love it!!

<3 cass

on Jan. 16 2010 at 2:49 am
Siraidly SILVER, Highland Park, Illinois
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http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/156410/Dry-Ice/

on Jan. 16 2010 at 2:48 am
Siraidly SILVER, Highland Park, Illinois
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this is better: http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/156410/Dry-Ice/

tamara_monta said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 8:09 pm
Thats so pretty. It reminds me of what love really. Keep up the great work

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:24 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

this is so pretty. ilove it. great job!!

on Jan. 14 2010 at 4:03 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

i love it its so deep(not in a cheesy way)

if i could id pick it up hug it then never let go

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:41 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thanks a lot!! :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:41 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thank you! I'm glad my poem means something pesonal to you...:)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:41 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thanks so much! :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:40 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
29 articles 0 photos 13 comments
Thank you:)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:40 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thanks!! :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:31 am
xxificouldfallxx PLATINUM, Southampton, Pennsylvania
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oh my that was so pretty :3

keep up the good work.

Joshyybearr said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:27 am
I love the poem it reminds me of someone very close to me. It's so beautiful wonderful job, please keep writing.

princess Nik said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:26 am
Your poem was really sweet and i liked the way it flowed ...the title fits it as well

Emma128 said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 4:39 pm
Emma128, Pheonix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
it's better to give than receive.

Neat piece of art! beautiful.

CH01C3 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2010 at 7:55 pm
CH01C3 BRONZE, Hartland, Wisconsin
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This was really sweet! I loved the part where you said "my love'll stretch there, across any sea."

on Jan. 12 2010 at 3:06 pm
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thanks! :) And I'll definitely check out your work soon.


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