I'm Such a Cute Cliche

By
More by this author
As far as love goes,
I love you.
I hear it goes far, and
I hope that's true.
'Cause when I'm not around
and you're alone,
you'll be warm and happy
with my heart close.
So I'll never leave you,
'cause wherever you'll be,
my love'll stretch there,
across any sea.
My dearest darling,
I want you to know,
my love is yours now, and
I'll never go.
My sweetest honey,
I want you to see,
my devotion's yours forever,
however long that may be.





Join the Discussion

This article has 30 comments. Post your own now!

SolvoAnimus said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 2:04 am
not bad...as a matter of fact...VERY GOOD!
 
LittlePoemWriter said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 6:40 pm
i loved it =]
 
Inkspired said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 2:13 pm
This is cute and really well written. It's simple, but has a really strong emotion. Great job!
 
cass said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 10:17 am
this is so beautiful and cute! Love it!!
<3 cass
 
Siraidly said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 2:49 am
http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/156410/Dry-Ice/
 
tamara_monta said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 8:09 pm
Thats so pretty. It reminds me of what love really. Keep up the great work
 
Siraidly replied...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 2:48 am
this is better: http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/156410/Dry-Ice/
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 6:24 pm
this is so pretty. ilove it. great job!!
 
JustAlice? said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 4:03 pm
i love it its so deep(not in a cheesy way)
if i could id pick it up hug it then never let go
 
xxificouldfallxx said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:31 am
oh my that was so pretty :3
keep up the good work.
 
Emanuella R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thanks a lot!! :)
 
Joshyybearr said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:27 am
I love the poem it reminds me of someone very close to me. It's so beautiful wonderful job, please keep writing.
 
Emanuella R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thank you! I'm glad my poem means something pesonal to you...:)
 
princess Nik said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:26 am
Your poem was really sweet and i liked the way it flowed ...the title fits it as well
 
Emanuella R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thanks so much! :)
 
Emmanuella A. said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Neat piece of art! beautiful.
 
Emanuella R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:40 pm
Thank you:)
 
CH01C3 said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 7:55 pm
This was really sweet! I loved the part where you said "my love'll stretch there, across any sea."
 
Emanuella R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:40 pm
Thanks!! :)
 
calephchad said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 2:46 pm
I love this poem! It's so sweet! This is definitely a 5 out of 5. If you'd like, come and check out some of my work. If you do, I recommend you read my poem entitled Autumn's Remembrance. Thanks and keep up the good work!
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback