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Horrid Snow

December 16, 2009
By peachtea09 BRONZE, Saugatuck, Michigan
peachtea09 BRONZE, Saugatuck, Michigan
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Snow, snow it's you I can't bear,
for you freeze my frizzy hair.

I look forward to sunshine,
and if I don't see it, you'll pay a fine.

I'm as cold as a breeze in the mid-winter night,
I looked in the mirror and my face was white.

Even though I like to play in you,
you always somehow end up in my shoe.

Where, oh where is summer?
A long ways away, that's a bummer.

I'll give you a plow,
Poof! You're gone; I'll give a bow.


The author's comments:
Snow... Snow inspired me. i was in school and it started snowing.

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RRRRR BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 10:53 pm
RRRRR BRONZE, Orrville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Education is when you read the fine print. Experience is when you don't."- Pete Seeger

"I didn't quit because I wasn't strong enough to live through it, i stopped because i was strong enough to move on." -Unknown

I like the first stanza and the third stanza, but the second and last don't really feel the connection with the others. If you keep up the first and third stanza writing, it would be really good.