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I wish to go o'er the sea again
o'er the sea and shore
back to where I once found you
standing at your door.

my love, you said you'd wait forever
forever, and a day
that was true until I left,
I left and went away

I came back in a year
went back up to my love's door
but where you once stood,
now a man trod upon that floor.

I wished to go o'er the sea again
o'er the sea to that shore
that shore where I once found you
but my love won’t be there anymore



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dreamer_believer said...
May 4, 2011 at 5:30 pm
wow!! i kinda don't know what to say now. that was amazing! i like how the poem took you on a sort of journey. plus there's a lot of truth and emotion you portrayed easily in this :) 5 stars all the way! :) wouldy you mind commenting on some of my newer work? i'd love some feedback. keep writing :)
 
East17 said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 12:33 pm

this is amazing! keep it up

would you mind looking at some of my writing i'd appreciate it :D

 
Supernova;) said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:07 pm
awwwwww I loved it:)
 
jessi replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 1:34 pm
aww! thanks! :)
 
BrittanyHale said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 4:54 pm
When another person reads it Theyll love it as much as I do.Ahmazing...
 
jessi replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 12:33 pm
thank you!
 
kheart said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 7:07 pm
This is an awesome poem! I really love it! It is on my favorite poetry list! Thanks for the comment on mine!
 
jessi replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 3:36 pm
wow thanks! glad someone likes it =)
 
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