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Dreaming Big

November 23, 2009
By Anonymous

The sky is a canvas on which i paint my dreams,
with vibrant colors or yellow,red and green.
Swirls of emotions wavering in the sky,
I watch the stars as they dance by.
But then a dark storm comes my way,
and i have a feeling it is here to stay.
The colors fade, and do you know why?
Its because i paint my dreams up in the sky.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem when i was feeling like i would never amount to anything. Well im going to prove my father wrong!

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on Jan. 12 2010 at 10:18 am
flightlessbird PLATINUM, La Monte, Missouri
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thankyou!!! you made my month!! lol i never thought any of my poetry was very good and i was gonna quit writing it. you inspired me to keep writing :-) thankyou soooo much!

on Jan. 2 2010 at 10:46 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

that was AMAZING!!!! really liked the imagery and the ending is genius, this is one of the best poems I've read. Really well written.