It Loves.

November 25, 2009
It hurts
It tears
It blinks
It stares.

It fixes
It changes
It rearranges.

A monster
A monster

Love is
A monster
And that
I don't doubt.

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400king said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 11:35 am
after reading the comments about the article, the poem just like blew my mind away. It explained my situation almost perfectly. great job.
caitlin.calamity replied...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thanks so much!! I really didn't think it was all that great because I only wrote it on a whim. I was feeling let down and betrayed by the one thing I didn't want in the first place.
400king replied...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 7:21 pm
well sometimes the whim ones are the best because real rythm you shouldn't have to sit there and think about it you just gotta let it flow.
michealangelo replied...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 10:38 am
very true. great job with this, i haven't gone through something like you have, but this poem really made me feel your pain.
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