It Loves.

Thanks so much!! I really didn't think it was all that great because I only wrote it on a whim. I was feeling let down and betrayed by the one thing I didn't want in the first place.

well sometimes the whim ones are the best because real rythm you shouldn't have to sit there and think about it you just gotta let it flow.

very true. great job with this, i haven't gone through something like you have, but this poem really made me feel your pain.