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My Own

November 29, 2009
By moejoebaybe24 BRONZE, Plano, Texas
moejoebaybe24 BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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The patter of the rain, the mischievous clouds, resemble to a day's empty heart.

Nothing's the matter with me, oh don't let my tears fool you over, for you are just too smart.

You hear me scream, you see me cry, you've had all your time helping greed.

I give you my hand--I need help! No matter how hard I try, no matter how hard I plead.

When will the sun show? My spirits lay low, with no trace of hope.

I know now I'm on my own, thanks to you, I figure you don't need me. I cannot bare you, I cannot cope.


The author's comments:
I felt alone at the time, where no one took the time to understand my troubles, or care to cooperate with my issues when they had been greedy and cared for themselves and didn't care how I felt about it.

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on Dec. 21 2009 at 2:29 pm
MyWrittenTruth GOLD, Ridgefield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a mess so just have fun with it!!!!"
"Im me and if you don't like it then,well, I don't really care!!XP"

wow...this poem is really touching and beautiful... and i could relate to the literature

on Dec. 20 2009 at 12:39 pm
wishing4thebest2day GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving will ultimately make you happier in life. It is rewarding for you to brighten up someone's day." -Anonymous

Amazing!!!

on Dec. 19 2009 at 1:45 pm
moejoebaybe24 BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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Haha, thank you, I didn't think it'd be that great. (:

on Dec. 17 2009 at 11:13 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Beautiful.

Grace09 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 10:09 pm
Grace09 BRONZE, Colorado City, Colorado
3 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg." By: I can't remember.

Wow, I know how you feel and I'm really really sorry:/. Good job kk.

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:47 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

VERY GOOD GREAT POEM!