Catch me

November 27, 2009
By ajparker BRONZE, Robinson, Texas
ajparker BRONZE, Robinson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If its not noon yet don't bother waking me up! ;)

As I stand
watching you
I look right in
see right through
theses thin sheets of glass
Keep us apart
but we are together
at the heart
our paths crossed
on the first day
it happened in a mystrious way
The tears I sheed are all for you
for I know our love will never be true
and as I dream
my days away
thinking of what
I have to say
to let it free
to get it out
I feel like I want to shout
I'd take a chance
make my leep
hoping that you will...
...Catch me

The author's comments:
my friends all like the exact same guy so I thought I would write them all a poem about love

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on Dec. 19 2009 at 5:33 am
Tamaimah.A BRONZE, Greater Manchester, Other
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This is really good!

And it's tough when all your friends ;like the same guy. If he ever happened to choose one of them, it would break friendships.

on Dec. 14 2009 at 8:57 pm
wishing4thebest2day GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving will ultimately make you happier in life. It is rewarding for you to brighten up someone's day." -Anonymous

Really good. I like the cadence of this poem and the real, easy to compare to, words.

Averie GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 6:38 pm
Averie GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Those for which writing is easy are not writers."

Fantastic job! This really speaks to the feelings of a lot of my friends, as well as me. Keep up the amazing work! :)

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