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Starting Over

November 21, 2009
By sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 257 comments

Making my way back to the start.
We used to be close but now we're apart.
You were my friend, now my enemy.
Youre not the same but why cant you see?
I was there with you through it all
We caught eachother when we wanted to fall.
But after the death, you would fade away.
To you its a game but I dont wanna play.
When i was lost I could come to you
But now that your gone I dont know what to do.
That day I lost two friends.
Wounds that i have that you cannot mend.
Hope heaven is well but I want you to know,
you;ll always be missed, we'll never let go.
A wise, dear, old friend, you left us too soon.
I'll stare at the sky watching the moon.
Wish you luck with a four-leaf clover.
Here you go again, life is starting over


The author's comments:
To have someone you know die is pretty hard. I wasnt too close to her but its still tough. because of her death i lost my best friend. i miss her a lot too...

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on Dec. 29 2010 at 2:27 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 257 comments
I appreciate the comment.! I love your poem too!

on Dec. 29 2010 at 12:00 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Great poem! I love it. I have to agree with questionauthority when she says this poem is very moving! Keep Writing! 

on Dec. 21 2009 at 6:28 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 257 comments
Thanks. Well actually, most of my poems do not rhyme. Ive noticed that people only seem to look at my rhyming ones. Some that do mot rhyme are flames, haunting, breaking down, and nightmares. :)

on Dec. 20 2009 at 10:46 pm
Wow. This was really moving. You used good imagery. I took a look at a few of your other poems too, have you considered maybe not writing rhyming poems? I think they are too restrictive on a good writer like you :)


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