Roses

Love is just like a rose.
It starts out small but then it grows.
It makes you happy and makes you sad.
When it's at its highest youll be glad
but just like a rose love falls apart
youre sitting there crying with a broken heart
the rose lives but it has to die youll star at the sky and want to fly
just like a rose love is beautiful
the feeling you have is so wonderfull
but at the end a rose can break
it feels like your heart was stabbed with a stake
all in all love is much like a rose
what will happen no one knows





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timeformetofly7 said...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 5:01 pm
lovely rhyming skillz... Good poem ^^ id only put in some punctuation so it's easier to read ;) Good job, ur a shweet writer
 
Pensive?Gurl said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 5:21 pm
i like the rhyme scheme and the overall subject.... i like it.
 
purple_ashes said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 1:20 pm
yeah i actually made a mistake the 7th line has to be split into two parts after the word die.
 
FunkiMonki said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 11:31 pm
wow it was so beautiful
 
Iheartthearts said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 5:13 pm
Wow, your poetry is amazing! I can defiantly feel the vibe and emotions.
 
christianjedi said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 8:54 pm
Nice poem. It could flow a little smoother, but I like the analogy. Love is real though; the problem is, what the world views today as love is mere infatuation. Nice work though!
 
kenna2013 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:14 pm
i love the poem and totally agree that lust and infatuation is commonly mistaken for love
 
Aurora said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 8:07 am
Thats what i say to! love isnt a true, lasting thing
 
MyriahShaleen said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 8:43 pm
Lovely. I really like this :]
 
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