A life

November 20, 2009
Soulless bodies are sitting with blank faces,
empty hearts and empty spaces,
everyday is more and more pain,
your head is down filled with shame
falling into an endless hole of darkness,
tears come down your heart full of blackness,
incessantly bleeding outside and in
scars and bruises punishment for your sin,
moving lifelessly one step at a time,
speaking without words just like a mime,
life is a waste and thats not a lie
you try but fail and you just cant deny,
feel the sadness feel the pain,
in your life nothing is gained,
step by step slowly dieing,
your gonna fail no point in trying,
theres nothing to do noting to say,
every minute of every day,
it goes to waste so say goodbye,
life is so pointless and that's not a lie.

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SaveTheUnicorns said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 4:25 pm
very melancholy. *sniff* *sniff* what inspired you to write this?
purple_ashes replied...
Dec. 25, 2010 at 7:35 pm
Nothing really inspired me. I just sat down one day and stared at a piece of paper for 10 minutes and this is what came out :)
XCLover said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 7:12 pm
Wow. Very powerful.
Aurora said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 8:05 am
When i feel down, your poem describes almost exactly how i feel. Life is pointless, i agree
sehrish said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 2:16 pm
it's great and good thing is that i wrote about life too. i think u should check it out mine too it's called 'That is Life"
dreamyface77 said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 3:21 pm
This is amazing!! It has so much power and emotion.
Pensive?Gurl replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 5:24 pm
ditto! i am really feeling this poem!
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