A life

November 20, 2009
By sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 257 comments

Soulless bodies are sitting with blank faces,
empty hearts and empty spaces,
everyday is more and more pain,
your head is down filled with shame
falling into an endless hole of darkness,
tears come down your heart full of blackness,
incessantly bleeding outside and in
scars and bruises punishment for your sin,
moving lifelessly one step at a time,
speaking without words just like a mime,
life is a waste and thats not a lie
you try but fail and you just cant deny,
feel the sadness feel the pain,
in your life nothing is gained,
step by step slowly dieing,
your gonna fail no point in trying,
theres nothing to do noting to say,
every minute of every day,
it goes to waste so say goodbye,
life is so pointless and that's not a lie.



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on Dec. 25 2010 at 7:35 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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Nothing really inspired me. I just sat down one day and stared at a piece of paper for 10 minutes and this is what came out :)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:25 pm
SaveTheUnicorns, Rensselaer, New York
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Favorite Quote:
There is always a rainbow after the storm!

very melancholy. *sniff* *sniff* what inspired you to write this?

XCLover GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:12 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

Wow. Very powerful.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 5:24 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

ditto! i am really feeling this poem!

Aurora said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 8:05 am
When i feel down, your poem describes almost exactly how i feel. Life is pointless, i agree

sehrish SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 2:16 pm
sehrish SILVER, Austin, Texas
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it's great and good thing is that i wrote about life too. i think u should check it out mine too it's called 'That is Life"

on Dec. 17 2009 at 3:21 pm
dreamyface77 SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.
Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.

It is our light not our darkness that most frightens us.

We ask ourselves, who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous,
talented and fabulous?

Actually, who are you not to be?

You are a child of God.

Your playing small does not serve the world.

There's nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other

people won't feel insecure around you.

We were born to make manifest the glory of
God that is within us.

It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone.

And as we let our own light shine,
we unconsciously give other people
permission to do the same.

As we are liberated from our own fear,
Our presence automatically liberates others.

—Marianne Williamson

This is amazing!! It has so much power and emotion.




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