November 16, 2009
By alejandra perez BRONZE, Colorado, Colorado
alejandra perez BRONZE, Colorado, Colorado
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Bats always hidden from view
Pretending to be something,
they're not
sleepy at day
awake at night
liking fog
also dark days
fast at points
go to normal school
trying to be normal
but can't
but keeps on trying and trying
but sometimes changes
and sometimes acts different
estatic on the outside
sensitive on the inside
crying at night
by an ugly curse
that will never be broken
for a
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The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this poem is that I'm like bats I'm sensitive trying to be happy but not; for bats are similar to me because were always sleepy in the morning and awake at night.

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on Dec. 18 2009 at 10:14 am
Great job, girl. I loved your personification poem!


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