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Ocean

November 13, 2009
By Carolyn Ritchie BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
Carolyn Ritchie BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
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The ocean big and blue.
As far as you can see.

The wind strong and true.
Of what you can hear.

See there in the ocean.
There are the dolphins.

Do you smell it.
Does the air smell fresh and clean.

Do you taste it.
The salt of the sea.

Do you feel it.
The air whispering across your skin like gentle fingers.

Do you hear it.
The squalls of the birds fighting for fish.

Does it feel relaxing.
to ride the waves.

Do you see it.
The whales who do the oceans dance.

Don`t you sense it.
It`s there, the ocean for you to enjoy.


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ptrt said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 10:16 am
This is a great poem from a young teen and shows great promise in the future if she keeps writing.....(great)