Imperfect

November 11, 2009
By , Kent, WA
I'm imperfect
My middle name
And it's a fact
That love's a game
I cannot win
Without your smile
Each silly grin
Says I'm worthwhile
I can't believe
That you won't leave
And what I offer
You'll receive
With open arms
And open heart
I'll give my all
Until we part
Of course for now
We'll live each day
Best we know how
To that I say
Carpe diem
Seize the day
The time we've got
Appreciate
Maybe then
When our eyes meet
And yours are smiling
Back at me
When on your love
I reflect
I can accept
I'm imperfect





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zombieattack said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 9:01 pm
So amazing,:)
 
ZiRaww! said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 8:08 pm
So sad but true.
 
Inkspired said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Love it. What you're saying, the rhythm, the whole thing. Amazing!
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 4:48 am
I love this piece. Great job on it!
 
Aurora said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 8:38 pm
Great job dude! this poemn has a great rythm(sp?) and thats one of the most important things that make a good poem. another is good content and youtr poem has tyhat to!
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 2:33 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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DisenchantedDancer111 said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 10:38 am
This poem flawlessly describes us all... Great job!!!!! For someone who may be imperfect, this poem was as perfect as they come!! :D Really captivating rhyme and rhythm! I love it!
 
luvinlife519 said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 6:57 pm
it was good! :) very touching, pls read mine! thanks XD
 
blackrose326 replied...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 8:19 pm
amazing simply grogeous(sp). Plz check mine out i think youll like
 
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