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Imperfect
November 11, 2009
I'm imperfect
My middle name
And it's a fact
That love's a game
I cannot win
Without your smile
Each silly grin
Says I'm worthwhile
I can't believe
That you won't leave
And what I offer
You'll receive
With open arms
And open heart
I'll give my all
Until we part
Of course for now
We'll live each day
Best we know how
To that I say
Carpe diem
Seize the day
The time we've got
Appreciate
Maybe then
When our eyes meet
And yours are smiling
Back at me
When on your love
I reflect
I can accept
I'm imperfect
© Anonymous
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zombieattack BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 9:01 pm
So amazing,:)
Aurora said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 8:38 pm
Great job dude! this poemn has a great rythm(sp?) and thats one of the most important things that make a good poem. another is good content and youtr poem has tyhat to!
blackrose326 GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 8:19 pm
amazing simply grogeous(sp). Plz check mine out i think youll like
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 2:33 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
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DisenchantedDancer111 SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 10:38 am
This poem flawlessly describes us all... Great job!!!!! For someone who may be imperfect, this poem was as perfect as they come!! :D Really captivating rhyme and rhythm! I love it!
luvinlife519 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 6:57 pm
it was good! :) very touching, pls read mine! thanks XD
