You MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   

Late at night, the entire world at peace.

Yet I am wide awake with no peace inside, because of you

The music is low, the room dark.

The only light burns from a candle, lit in memory of you

It, like my love for you, will burn forever strong.

My life has gone on to include everyone, but you

Have drifted from my life, your decision,

not mine.

Times are fast, but drag on indefinitely.

The exhaustion, physical and emotional,

only remind me

Of the strength once given by you,

now forever lost.

The infrequent, but everlasting, times of solitude.

The music and me.

The only company is the fire, that burns

In my heart, Where I am allowed

only memories of you

Memories that haunt and remind me

Of what I can no longer have

Your love, made me strong a strength

I carried into all I did.

A love I would have always returned

With open ease yet intense meaning.

And still you think this is how it must be

You and then the fire and me.





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on Dec. 5 2011 at 3:13 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 1:42 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

omg i compleely luv this. keep it up!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:48 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

I absolutely love this. extremely powerful with a soft and sad rythm. amazing:) i love and truly appriciate the honesty your words portray, and the raw and in depth feelings behind them. great job. you are a great writer.

i'd love it if you (or anyone else reading this) viewed some of my work and told me what you thought. especially my poem 'Torturer of a King'. it would be greatly appriciated:)


on May. 17 2010 at 9:30 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

Wow this is quite amazing

on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:41 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

whoa. definetly 1 of my favez.

awesome talent ya got there girl.

plz keep it up & keep writing!! ;))

on Sep. 23 2009 at 4:31 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

Hey!! Thanks for the comments you typed on one my poems.. lol and your poems are really good. i like your poems too!!

on Aug. 13 2009 at 3:34 am
Brutal_Antics BRONZE, Pahrump, Nevada
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Very well sculpted, did not over exagerate at all. Simplicity is key. You took a very intense topic and hit all the points without rambling on. You did a beautiful job and chose your words carefully; the entire passage flowed. Every word connected with the sentence and thus the entire piece meshed very well. GREAT WORK...looking forward to your next piece.

on Jul. 24 2009 at 1:38 am
yourworstnightmare BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing. (Teddy Roosevelt)

I loved it. and as GASP134 said, "Losing is hard. But losing what you never had and wished for is harder." (I would know.) great job!!

on Jul. 9 2009 at 8:34 pm
jay_jayy:D GOLD, Trussville, Alabama
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oh. my god. this is an amazing poem,

it makes me think of this guy...

:'(



you are a wonderful writer.

niki <3 said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 1:27 am
i realy liked this poem it applied alot to a friend of mine. im sure she would also like this poem. u have talen t.keep writing

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on Jun. 13 2009 at 12:37 am
RiaRen SILVER, New Bothwell, Other
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hey, that was amazing. you have really got sum talent. the ending is the powerful bit and i think it is great. the emotion that was put into this and then described just rite was really great.

keep writing!!

if ou have any free time, could u check out my stuff and if you can critisize, be my guest!!

Kiersten

on Jun. 8 2009 at 11:14 pm
Sandy Karim BRONZE, El Cajon, California
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awww :( That is so sad. i can totally relate to that.

it was well written with deep emotions! love it

<3loved said...
on Jun. 3 2009 at 2:40 am
girl ive been through this! this is an amazing poem!! it describes my feelings to a te!! gooood job!!!

<3

on May. 28 2009 at 11:39 pm
kittykat123 SILVER, Fairmount City, Pennsylvania
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hi!luv ur style!! i also write poetry1 except mine i ryme.

you did really good!:):):):) and rember to think positive too!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2009 at 12:24 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I really love this! It reminds me so much of...well, something i know is happening right now with one of my friends and something I'm afraid is going to happen with me. It's something I would write about- but never would have wrote it this way... I love your style!!! And the way it's all fit in.. an amazing picture.

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on May. 3 2009 at 7:02 pm
Lay18 PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live and Learn

nice work!!!!!!

on May. 3 2009 at 6:52 pm
Writer4life BRONZE, Acton, Massachusetts
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good job

on May. 1 2009 at 12:38 am
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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girl, you touched my heart. i luv your lines. i luv your last line. the best i ever heard.

keep up the good work.

on Apr. 22 2009 at 2:10 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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It's funny how one can easily have to rely on their last line to deliver an impact. That happens to me a lot, and this poem almost does that. Still, although it is yet another poem focusing too much on regret of a deprivation of love, I am well impacted and impressed. Good job. Not one of those universally speaking poems, but its good.

on Mar. 23 2009 at 10:06 pm
(=amanda=) GOLD, Somerset, Ohio
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this is amazing, deep and very beautiful.


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