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By CINDY L., Newton, MA
What's your name?
Is it Thomas, Betty, Monique, Jennifer or Christina?
Or is it something more unique,
Like Winifred, Bonita, Ruse,Takeem, Elwae or Reena?
What's your name?
Please tell me.
If you don't,
It's all the same,
It's what is inside that counts.
This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.
Victoria J.I like it it has a very good lesson in a short amount
kinda reminds me of "a rose by any other name would smell as sweet"...i like it :)
hello, um your poem is pretty great but is a bit short. maybe a little depth or play of words would make it even better.
all in all, this was pretty awesome
musico thats good even if it is short.
who cares wat people think.
o and my name is heaven!!:P
cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 18 at 8:59 pm:
Apr. 18 at 8:59 pm:
I thought it was ok. u need to make it longer, add some more depth/ figurative language.
moniquecheer said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 9:52 pm:
Dec. 16, 2008 at 9:52 pm:
hey ! moniques my name. I thought it was a unique name.
Vira said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 5:33 pm:
Dec. 10, 2008 at 5:33 pm:
I like it. It sends a kind of unique vibe especially at the end when it says its what's in the inside that counts. I've never heard that term refer to names before.
It's a little short. Maybe if you made it a little longer it could be even better.
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