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Season Sorrow 
By BRIDGET W., Newton, MA
The rustling of the autumn wind that bangs my old screen door
Reminds me of the cool summer nights we spent along the shore.
The change of seasons from summer to fall changed our hearts as well.
And soon I found I knew you no more, our lasting love had fell.
The warm hearting days we spent walking hand in hand
As our toes were shipwrecked boats, sunken by the sand.
Now I lie in the dead autumn leaves, reminiscing about our past
The winter months go by so slowly, while my summer went so fast.
Till now never have I realized, the puzzles I cannot solve
From spring to fall, to summer, like the seasons, we too evolve.
Don't ever be afraid to face a changing day ,
For life is a never ending path, and the challenge is to find your way.
i liek it. its pretyy good and you have better rhymes, i liek rhymes.. lol
cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 12:33 am:
Apr. 22, 2009 at 12:33 am:
good similes/metaphors. very philosophocal. (sorry i can't spell that for my life)
Great job!Your poem makes me remember so much....
Reading this was really enjoyable. The last line seems to be a philosophy of life.
i really like this. i love the ending line
Sheerz said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 10:45 am:
Dec. 10, 2008 at 10:45 am:
Very good content. It could be better if you would keep the same number of syllables per line. That lets it flow more easily.












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