Season Sorrow MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown


The rustling of the autumn wind that bangs my old screen door

Reminds me of the cool summer nights we spent along the shore.

The change of seasons from summer to fall changed our hearts as well.

And soon I found I knew you no more, our lasting love had fell.

The warm hearting days we spent walking hand in hand

As our toes were shipwrecked boats, sunken by the sand.

Now I lie in the dead autumn leaves, reminiscing about our past

The winter months go by so slowly, while my summer went so fast.

Till now never have I realized, the puzzles I cannot solve

From spring to fall, to summer, like the seasons, we too evolve.

Don't ever be afraid to face a changing day ,

For life is a never ending path, and the challenge is to find your way.

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on Aug. 9 2009 at 5:07 pm
Taylor Mann GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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That was really GOOD!:)

on May. 22 2009 at 2:49 pm
hurting_real_bad SILVER, Conneaut, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Yes I love him. I love him more than anything else in this world and there is nothing that I would like better than to hold on to him forever. But I know it's not for the best. So no matter how much my heart is going to break, I've got to let him go so he can know just how much I love him. Maybe if I'm lucky, he'll come back, but if not, I can make it through this.”

i love it

on May. 5 2009 at 9:11 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

i liek it. its pretyy good and you have better rhymes, i liek rhymes.. lol

on Apr. 22 2009 at 12:33 am
good similes/metaphors. very philosophocal. (sorry i can't spell that for my life)

Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2009 at 2:30 pm
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

Great job!Your poem makes me remember so much....

on Mar. 7 2009 at 12:43 am
WHOiNEED2B BRONZE, Tigerton, Wisconsin
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Reading this was really enjoyable. The last line seems to be a philosophy of life.

on Feb. 20 2009 at 12:41 am
SaveThEmpty SILVER, Rathbun, Iowa
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i really like this. i love the ending line

Sheerz said...
on Dec. 10 2008 at 10:45 am
Very good content. It could be better if you would keep the same number of syllables per line. That lets it flow more easily.


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