Season Sorrow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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The rustling of the autumn wind that bangs my old screen door

Reminds me of the cool summer nights we spent along the shore.

The change of seasons from summer to fall changed our hearts as well.

And soon I found I knew you no more, our lasting love had fell.

The warm hearting days we spent walking hand in hand

As our toes were shipwrecked boats, sunken by the sand.

Now I lie in the dead autumn leaves, reminiscing about our past

The winter months go by so slowly, while my summer went so fast.

Till now never have I realized, the puzzles I cannot solve

From spring to fall, to summer, like the seasons, we too evolve.

Don't ever be afraid to face a changing day ,

For life is a never ending path, and the challenge is to find your way.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Taylor M. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 5:07 pm
That was really GOOD!:)
 
Jackie K. said...
May 22, 2009 at 2:49 pm
i love it
 
Kumang said...
May 5, 2009 at 9:11 am
i liek it. its pretyy good and you have better rhymes, i liek rhymes.. lol
 
cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 12:33 am
good similes/metaphors. very philosophocal. (sorry i can't spell that for my life)
 
Shannon_McCauley said...
Mar. 9, 2009 at 2:30 pm
Great job!Your poem makes me remember so much....
 
WHOiNEED2B said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 12:43 am
Reading this was really enjoyable. The last line seems to be a philosophy of life.
 
SaveThEmpty said...
Feb. 20, 2009 at 12:41 am
i really like this. i love the ending line
 
Sheerz said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 10:45 am
Very good content. It could be better if you would keep the same number of syllables per line. That lets it flow more easily.
 
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