Mortality MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown


Drip, Drip, Drip, Drip,

Like sand in an hour glass -

Drip, Drip, Drip, Drip,

Slowly yet steadily it flows -

Drip, Drip, Drip, Drip,

A thick, red viscous fluid -

Drip, Drip, Drip, Drip,

Quick! Someone stop the leak!

Drip. .

Drip. . .

Drip. . . .

Drip. . . . .

(Silence). . . . .

Too late.

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This article has 8 comments.

insurgo BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 1:12 am
insurgo BRONZE, Centennial, Colorado
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That was pretty good. The end really made an impact. I wonder what inspired this piece...

on May. 13 2009 at 9:50 pm
Serena Sawyer, Kellyville, Oklahoma
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i love it! it's amazing!

nana.riley said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 4:59 pm
i really liked this....

Is it about someone gettin hurt???

lol Good poem. :)

on Mar. 14 2009 at 4:32 am
hannahmichelle PLATINUM, Lewisburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Passion doesn't look beyond the moment of its existence.

Hmmm. I like your title choice. made the poem much more interesting =)

mina123 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2009 at 8:06 pm
mina123 BRONZE, Hasa, Minnesota
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itis really short and mysterios, keep up

Kissin' K8 said...
on Dec. 25 2008 at 5:56 am
huh? is it about someone dying?

on Nov. 14 2008 at 5:46 pm
Ever read Shel Silverstein? It sounds very similar to his Anaconda poem.

Demon23 said...
on Nov. 14 2008 at 12:54 pm
I LOVE this poem! Its really good!


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