Best Friends Forever MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!





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on Mar. 31 2011 at 11:27 am
emoducks BRONZE, Schuylkill Haven, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life will only be amazing if you make it that way."
-Me (:

this was an amazing poem :) i loved it :)

ms. hotstuff said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:41 am

this poem made me think that my friendship would last  from the start and i would love my best friend

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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normgrl GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:08 am
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

Three Cheers! For this poem and all best friends :) Your poem sent me through a flashback of memories with my best friend and really made me think. Good job!

on Mar. 24 2011 at 5:38 pm
Griffiths1998 BRONZE, Clymer, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
You see that girl? Yeah her. She seems so invincible, right? But just touch her & she'll wince. She has secrets& trust no one. She's the perfect example of betrayal. Because everyone that she's ever trusted has hurt her.

haha my best friend emailed me a link to this... very good job!!!

on Mar. 9 2011 at 1:22 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.

born an original, why die a copy?

wow. Very good:) i made my best friend read this:) lol

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:02 am
GracieBrunetti, Easley, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This is such a great poem. i can relate to this because it describes my relationship with my best friend. Loved it!

on Feb. 18 2011 at 9:51 pm
Lost.In.Life BRONZE, Port Angeles, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Exactly :)

on Feb. 15 2011 at 10:26 pm
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
its aptly described and i loved it

Stacey.L said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 5:34 pm
Stacey.L, Tsaile, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Horses are bulit to run, Summers are meant to shine above, flowers are made to bloom, and we were born to love!" -Jewel

Uhm, i liked the poem! it reminds me of the friendship i have with my friends(:

on Feb. 15 2011 at 4:54 pm
carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
12 articles 2 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love another person is to see the face of God."

I agree. This was cute... for a fifth grader. I like poems a little deeper and not so obvious about what the metaphors are.

on Feb. 15 2011 at 3:21 pm
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
4 articles 3 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

Wow amazing it def describes how best friedns are i can feel the the meaning behind it...

 


limelove said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 9:32 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
0 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memories last forever.

I love it and i can teel by the words you choose and what you said that this friendship will really last forever.

on Jan. 24 2011 at 4:44 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Beautiful. A testimony to friendship.

live2swim said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 10:49 am
i agree with ilikef00d:) they really do come your heart, and they will always stay by your side:)

ilikef00d said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 10:43 am
friends are from the heart, you just have to find one u believe is gonna stay by your sidee.

on Jan. 24 2011 at 10:03 am
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments
I absolutely loved it! It perfectly describes the bond between best friends, good job keep it up!

JohnniK SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 8:55 am
JohnniK SILVER, Yongin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am"

Its soooooooo great poem you wrote thanks for sharing

on Jan. 2 2011 at 9:34 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Such a great poem, I love it! Makes me think of my best friend, haha.

on Jan. 2 2011 at 2:25 pm
LightMeUpTheStars BRONZE, Middletwown, Pennsylvania
2 articles 5 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one is free, even the birds are chained to the sky."
"Insecurities are about as useful as trying to put the pin back in the grenade."

I think she put it as "know" because the friendship is still alive. If it was "knew" then the friendship would've ended because it would've been in the past tense.

on Jan. 2 2011 at 12:13 pm
This is a wonderful poem! WOW! Keep up the good work. :)




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