Best Friends Forever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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DarkenRose said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:03 am
Really good and it's so beautiful:)
 
Saffy96 said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 11:20 pm
Sorry, but I think you need to focus on using more strong emotion and passionate feelings than you used in this poem. The phrases and words were slightly predictable and clique. My advice: read more classical poetry and try practising similar language.
 
svanb replied...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 2:16 am
I agree with your feedback. It was a simple poem with simple words. With a theme as powerful as friendship, it could have had stronger use of words.
 
BoRdIcLe replied...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 1:41 pm
I agree 100%. If her friendship with this person meant a lot to her i would expect she'd use stronger words.
 
bochoyboy said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 6:50 pm
I didnt really like this poem very much. there are alot of very bland thoughts and ideas I thought. also its not really a subject i can relate on so maybe thats it.
 
LovelyBlueRose said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 6:31 am
I tagged this as FAVORITE!
 
ElleNicole said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 11:05 am

This is kinda like my poem 'Change' ...

Check it out?

 
RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 10:44 am
awwwwwhhhh :') this poem is amazing! it totally describes my bff n I!
 
MIssy96396 said...
May 6, 2011 at 11:43 am
good poem! i showed it to my bestfriend <33
 
SeCeRtFrIeNd said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:15 pm
THis poem is beautiful and i luv it, you did a really good job.....this poem is passionate, keep on writing poems you are really good at it. :)
 
Missyninja said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 9:04 pm
I Love it! It's really good :)
 
ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 8:07 pm
Great job! I loved it.
 
madbunnymonique said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 1:33 pm
This is sooooooooo good my bestfrieng got kicked out of school because of me and i made her read this we both started to cry
 
emoducks said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 11:27 am
this was an amazing poem :) i loved it :)
 
ms. hotstuff said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 9:41 am

this poem made me think that my friendship would last  from the start and i would love my best friend

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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normgrl said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 9:08 am
Three Cheers! For this poem and all best friends :) Your poem sent me through a flashback of memories with my best friend and really made me think. Good job!
 
cheerboo12 replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:55 am

omg so much memories love this poem an my bff's to serena pelin kirca love ya gurl

 

 
Griffiths1998 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 5:38 pm
haha my best friend emailed me a link to this... very good job!!!
 
musiclover114 said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 1:22 pm
wow. Very good:) i made my best friend read this:) lol
 
GracieBrunetti said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:02 am
This is such a great poem. i can relate to this because it describes my relationship with my best friend. Loved it!
 
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