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By BRYAN F., Medford, MA
He looked at me with his head tilted some degrees
He looked at me as though to appease
He looked at me in afternoon delight
He looked at me with all of his might
He looked at me through the thickness of thin
He looked at a drop of sweat running down my skin
I twisted and turned in order to see
The man in the distance that was looking at me.
This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.
mindy M.what a cliffhanger, i like the way you didnt go on, leaving it to others to decide what would happen whether tragic or happy.
i like it it had a strong begin but i wish u would have gone more about that man in the distance was he a older guy that liked yonger girl, a to be boyfriend, just who was he if you ended as you begain it would be a great poem but its still good
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