Untitled This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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He looked at me with his head tilted some degrees

He looked at me as though to appease

He looked at me in afternoon delight

He looked at me with all of his might

He looked at me through the thickness of thin

He looked at a drop of sweat running down my skin

I twisted and turned in order to see

The man in the distance that was looking at me.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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mindy M. said...
Mar. 1, 2009 at 11:03 pm
what a cliffhanger, i like the way you didnt go on, leaving it to others to decide what would happen whether tragic or happy.
 
BabyGirl11010 said...
Feb. 19, 2009 at 2:00 pm
i like it it had a strong begin but i wish u would have gone more about that man in the distance was he a older guy that liked yonger girl, a to be boyfriend, just who was he if you ended as you begain it would be a great poem but its still good
 
twillis222 said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 4:25 pm
wow....



i like it ..

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