The Day He Left MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown


A phone call in the evening . . .

A tearful dispute downstairs.

Silence the next morning, await.

Little said, much emotion . . . and memories.

Mama, why'd he leave?

Where is he going, Papa?

Was he unhappy? Sad?

What has happened, Papa?



Flipping through yellowing leaves

Their happiness is felt.

A feeling of togetherness

. . . Ascending stairs, still lost . . .

Searching emptied drawers,

Scanning the orderly shelves.

Nothing out of the ordinary.

aeAn empty bed, an empty roomae

Silence from full mouths,

A chill from the open door

Glances towards the chair

. . . A dim light outside the door . . .

Again seeing him turn away . . .

A washed face, combed hair.

Young eyes of bravery and eagerness

. . . Papa's uniform in his bag . . .

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mindymax GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 11:13 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

such a loss is hard to cope, not knowing is worse.mournig the loss of something unknown is tragic.


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