The Crush MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown


Deep in my dreams you hold me so near

But in real life, it's all much too clear.

You are just a boy hardly knowing my name.

Not knowing of the love that awaits your claim.

If you could love me as I do you.

A love that we could have, so strong and so true.

So next time I see you and our eyes meet,

Think of the ache in my heart so deep.

Because of this aching I feel down inside

I write you a poem of the feelings I hide.

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on Jun. 26 2014 at 10:50 am
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

Cute!!! :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 7:06 pm
Reconciliar DIAMOND, Pembroke Pines, Florida
78 articles 7 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is love"
"You can't have a happy ending without a tragic begining, but the best part of the story is the middle."
"Great men fall in the fire it is the honor lesser men to light the flames no matter the cost"

I love this!

on Jul. 20 2011 at 2:32 pm
WritinLuver101 GOLD, Akron, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceted. It is never rude or selfish. It does not take pleasure in other peoples sins, but delights in the truth.

This is too cute!!:)

Kaycee said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 7:54 pm
Kaycee, -, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
fun is a renewable resource !! :D

i really liked this poem...i just submitted mine to this website.....when it gets approved i hope you get a chance to read it.

Jessica said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 8:39 pm
a cruch is the cutiest thing that could ever happen to a wonderful feeling, the butterfies in your stomach, blushing everitme he talks to you, chuckles everytime you see him. its just great. but just hope it dont end up ugly..learn to liveit and enjoy it

on Nov. 13 2009 at 1:51 pm
megaboopizzle, Canfield, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Me and Teddy Rucksben stirring up a ruckus.

I love this poem. I like how it rhymes and how it flows. I can relate to the feelings portrayed in this poem; it reminds me of when I was young in elementary school and had crushes on boys that I thought were cute.

on Jun. 22 2009 at 8:27 pm
ChenChen SILVER, Dover, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Either way, change will come. It could be bloody, or it could be beautiful. It depends on us."

I can totally empathize with your poem. And I've written a poem or two on this subject as well.

on Jun. 6 2009 at 3:50 pm
peacelove041792 BRONZE, Reseda, California
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
ooooh i like!! i totally dream about the guy i want all the time!

on May. 18 2009 at 12:55 am
dirtbiker2012 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments
WOW!!! I love your poem!!! I can mostdefiently relate to this!!! pleaz keep writing!!! check out my poems!!

jessie4736 said...
on May. 16 2009 at 5:19 pm
absolutly perfect! amazing ^.^

Uyen Do BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2009 at 6:14 pm
Uyen Do BRONZE, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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omg!!!! I love this poem!!!! <3

Piggygal94 said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 11:28 pm
I loved this poem! I can relate to it so much! I think of the crush that i have just fits! you are a great writer!

on Apr. 10 2009 at 5:26 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments
love love i love love!!!!!!!!!

StarrBaby GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2009 at 4:35 am
StarrBaby GOLD, New York, New York
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
A heart is like a contract it should never be broken

this is so nice he must mean a lot to you.i can relate to this poem rite now

on Apr. 6 2009 at 5:11 pm
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.

Great work! I love how the rhyme makes the poem flow.

on Mar. 29 2009 at 3:23 am
phavi1995 SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments
I love it! check this one out , its similar to this one

on Mar. 6 2009 at 2:20 pm
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People often say that we as Native Americans walk in two worlds, but that's not true. I believe that we only walk in one, but we have two paths in which we can take." Chance Rush

I love this poem. I swear I almost cried when I thought of the crushes I have had and have now. It's really good.

mindymax GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 11:16 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

wow.unknown love is the kind that die fast, make that love be known and quickly.nice piece

Tessa Wilson said...
on Feb. 20 2009 at 5:46 pm
Tessa Wilson, Bemidji, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
I like it alot. It really explains how much he must mean to you.It explains how i feel right now.

on Nov. 10 2008 at 1:45 am
Wow i liked alot good job !


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