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By SYLVIA B., Wakefield, MA
Deep in my dreams you hold me so near
But in real life, it's all much too clear.
You are just a boy hardly knowing my name.
Not knowing of the love that awaits your claim.
If you could love me as I do you.
A love that we could have, so strong and so true.
So next time I see you and our eyes meet,
Think of the ache in my heart so deep.
Because of this aching I feel down inside
I write you a poem of the feelings I hide.
This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.
megaboopizzleI love this poem. I like how it rhymes and how it flows. I can relate to the feelings portrayed in this poem; it reminds me of when I was young in elementary school and had crushes on boys that I thought were cute.
Jiselle M.I can totally empathize with your poem. And I've written a poem or two on this subject as well.
ooooh i like!! i totally dream about the guy i want all the time!
cryinsumtearsWOW!!! I love your poem!!! I can mostdefiently relate to this!!! pleaz keep writing!!! check out my poems!!
Piggygal94 said...
Apr. 14 at 11:28 pm:
Apr. 14 at 11:28 pm:
I loved this poem! I can relate to it so much! I think of the crush that i have now...it just fits! you are a great writer!
Shasha A.this is so nice he must mean a lot to you.i can relate to this poem rite now
YeseniaGGreat work! I love how the rhyme makes the poem flow.
I love it! check this one out , its similar to this one
http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/93702/Gone-Forever/
I love this poem. I swear I almost cried when I thought of the crushes I have had and have now. It's really good.
wow.unknown love is the kind that die fast, make that love be known and quickly.nice piece
I like it alot. It really explains how much he must mean to you.It explains how i feel right now.
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