Rhymes And Reason This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


Not much rhymes with slush

or mush.

Nothing rhymes with weather

but tether.



The snow

Does blow

This poem about the

"pneumatics, aerodynamics, aerography, aeroscopy, aerology,

barometry, anemometry" (Roget's Thesaurus, "Weather," nouns.)

May not


You know,

It's cold

When you're old.

Whether the snuzz does bluzz

Or the snow does blow

Snow is white in the light.

(Unless it's February, which has twenty-eight days and yellow

snow and "i" before "e" except after "c" or on consecutive


Come in out of the rain!

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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_Zavery_ said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 3:28 pm
I see the idea you're getting at, but it's confusing. Work on getting your point across.   =)
ElleNicole said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 3:05 pm

This needs a bit of work. It also confused me and I agree with the last comment, there wasn't much depth to it. I do think it has potential, however. Keep writing.

And check me out? Thanks so much and good luck to you. =)

KassidyLeigh said...
May 18, 2009 at 9:27 pm
This peice kinda feels confusing. I feel like its the information part of the poem, rather then the poem. There's not a whole lot of depth to it, but I do like the fact that it's differnt. Check out 11:11 Memories; teen ink raw!
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