Give Me This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Give me your heart,

So it I can fill.

Show me you love me,

And you always will.



Give me your reasons,

And I'll give you mine.

There won't ever be a mountain

That we can't climb.



Give me your hand,

And take hold of mine.

And together we'll stand

The test of time.



Give me a dream,

And I'll make it come true.

All because I love you.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Anjo! said...
May 19, 2009 at 5:14 am
Love it.. i like the tempo to the poem. its awesome.
 
YeseniaG said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 12:43 am
Good work. I like it up until the last stanza. Its length doesn't really flow with the rest of the poem.
 
conkiemonstar said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 4:54 pm
Um... Its a good poem, but the short choppy lines affect it's ability to portry love.
 
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