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Give Me 
By JENNIFER S., Holbrook, MA
Give me your heart,
So it I can fill.
Show me you love me,
And you always will.
Give me your reasons,
And I'll give you mine.
There won't ever be a mountain
That we can't climb.
Give me your hand,
And take hold of mine.
And together we'll stand
The test of time.
Give me a dream,
And I'll make it come true.
All because I love you.
Good work. I like it up until the last stanza. Its length doesn't really flow with the rest of the poem.
conkiemonstar said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 4:54 pm:
Dec. 18, 2008 at 4:54 pm:
Um... Its a good poem, but the short choppy lines affect it's ability to portry love.












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