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Give Me This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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By JENNIFER S., Holbrook, MA

   

Give me your heart,

So it I can fill.

Show me you love me,

And you always will.



Give me your reasons,

And I'll give you mine.

There won't ever be a mountain

That we can't climb.



Give me your hand,

And take hold of mine.

And together we'll stand

The test of time.



Give me a dream,

And I'll make it come true.

All because I love you.




This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Anjo! said...
May 19 at 5:14 am:

Love it.. i like the tempo to the poem. its awesome.

 
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YeseniaG said...
Apr. 11 at 12:43 am:

Good work. I like it up until the last stanza. Its length doesn't really flow with the rest of the poem.

 
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conkiemonstar said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 4:54 pm:

Um... Its a good poem, but the short choppy lines affect it's ability to portry love.

 
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