Weather And The Old Man

By Emily L.,

It's raining, it's pouring,

The old man is snoring.

It's raining, it's sprinkling,

The old man is wrinkling.

It's hailing, it's sleeting,

The old man is eating.

It's flurrying, it's snowing,

The old man is sewing.

It's sunny, it's nice!

The old man is sucking ice!

This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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AnimalGirl said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 12:16 pm:

I LOVED IT! IT WAS REALLY FUNNY, AND GOOD

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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:42 pm:

This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
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ellie315 replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 11:22 pm :

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Angie R. said...
Nov. 4, 2009 at 1:54 pm:

Cool,Nice twist to a classic