Your Kiss

October 29, 2009
Smile now, smile later,
everyday my pain grows greater.
Please just love me, hold my hand,
love me forever, be my man.
Kiss me gently, stroke my side,
wrap your arms around me, let me hide.
Remember our first kiss, I miss the spark,
I sat on my deck reliving the moment till dark.
Dont forget me, remember my voice love,
till god takes us up above.

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BiancaMarie said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 10:14 am

great poem gurly.! you should deff keep wrighting.! never give up your passion.! and most of alll never give up the ones you love.!

my rating=5 star (: great job:D

Louis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 5:06 am
This poem is very resemblant to 'Upon my heart' in my opinion. Again, I ove the lulling flow in it. Keep it up!
:)krysten(: replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 8:59 pm
Thank you for the positive comments! They really make me feel good about my poetry! :)
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