Remember Me

October 28, 2009
I remember you, do you remember me?
you wanted out, so I set you free.
It broke my heart, it cut me deep, now I understand,
I truly fell in love with you, but you wouldnt be my man.
I was a cutter, you were too, we helped eachother stop,
there was no pain, no more suffering, we were on the top.
You showed me how to keep straight on this winding road,
held me and kept me close in the dark and cold.
I fell in love so easy with you, I had no trouble,
every day I talked to you our love began to double.
Your words helped me when I was falling down,
sometimes you didnt catch me and I hit the ground.
I knew we started drifting, I knew it in my heart,
there was nothing I could say to fix it, I had done my part.
Your wonderful laugh and voice echo in my head,
it makes me smile, makes me scream, I want to be dead.
I dont know why you left me, I may not ever know,
I let my heart hide my love, never let it show.
My feelings, they are locked away hidden from the world,
love is like walking on an inch thick cord.
We were the greatest of friends, together forever,
but now that its over, I cant ever do it again, never.
My heart is locked away inside my chest, never love again,
my time is running shart, my blood is running thin.
This is the end of my story,
now do you remember me?

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BiancaMarie said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 10:17 am

awww.! i love it.! and i can really relate.! great job sweety.! your a great poet.! :D

rating=5 (:

krysten replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Thanks so much! That means alot!
Shuchee said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 1:41 am
That's a lovely poem. It reminds of me a song of Rabindranath Tagore. Its a lovely romantic Bengali song. I like it very much and your poem reminds me of my favorite song, so....................................
:)MissLady(: replied...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 6:32 pm
Thank you. All of my poems are about things that i've gone through. Where can I find this song? I would love to listen to it.
Shuchee replied...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 11:54 pm
I don't know if it is available online. But I have the song in my pc. If I find any link online, I will let you know.
:)MissLady(: replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 5:15 pm
Awesome. Thanks
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