Dark Tranquilities

October 28, 2009
By calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Fractured inside my shell,
as I wonder what is about me.
Confused with curious assumptions,
while solace inches me to breathe.
Darkness consuming me,
as it pushes me deeper into my slumber.
A dream, awakening me,
sprouting me out to what lies asunder.



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on Nov. 13 2010 at 8:36 pm
ImaneAitDaoud SILVER, Minniapolis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
“look up towards the skies and you'll realize that love is mightier than hate and death is none other than the start of a new adventure.”

hey, great poem thanks for commenting on mine, by the way love the dark theme it's great

on Aug. 8 2010 at 6:34 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Keep writing! THERE HASNT BEEN ANYTHING NEW!! I stalk your writing because I enjoy it so much, but please, write so I know you're alive. At least add me on email or facebook so you can share some iffy things with me. I die to hear your work :D

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on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:49 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since." ~Salvador Dali

"fractured inside my shell" good god. that's awesome.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 7:43 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

This is excellent! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work too? Thanks so much

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:24 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you so much.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:43 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

It was really pretty!!!! keep writing!!! i loved it!!

on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:18 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

wow u r an excelent writer. u should check out a couple of poems. appriciate much!!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:34 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you soo much. !

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:50 pm
CuteCourt101 SILVER, Newark, Delaware
9 articles 1 photo 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Acting like someone else is a waste of who you are!" ~Unknown

Another great poem .. good job

on Feb. 4 2010 at 11:10 am
Peace182 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone has a dream, but its up to you to make that dream a reality. Life is to short not to.

great poem! i love it. hopefully i'll be posting a new one soon..

on Jan. 20 2010 at 2:30 pm
joshua mitchell BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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great poem man

on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:26 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Well thanks anyways! And you're more than welcome! :D

on Jan. 15 2010 at 7:09 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Hey, no, thank you. I appreciate reading your writing. Keep submitting things for me to understand and you don't need to thank me! :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 3:00 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you very much!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 2:59 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 2:58 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you so much! That's exactly the way I feel. It's nice to know that you actually understand it. I figured no one could comprehend what any of my work meant. So it's really nice to know that there's someone else out there who actually gets the imagery I express. Thanks again!

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on Jan. 13 2010 at 4:43 pm
Emma128, Pheonix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
it's better to give than receive.

Wow This is really Great!

on Dec. 7 2009 at 6:01 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Hello. I really enjoy your work. Your thoughts and phrases capture me and remind me of my own work. I'd love it if you could read some of my work and comment it/ rate it? I'd love to further discuss our writings. People like you peak my interest and when my interest is peaked, look out. :D I'd highly suggest you read my two works "Tomorrow's Fate" and "Staring Into Me." Keep it up. Seriously. I'd like to see more posted. I'm a fan. :p

on Dec. 7 2009 at 5:58 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

His phrase about solace inching him to breathe makes perfect sense. Solace can mean to comfort, but it also means- 2. comfort in sorrow, misfortune, or trouble. Finding comfort in the misfortune of his mind brings him to continue breathe. To me, it makes perfect sense. Maybe you'd have to feel like the author to understand.

on Nov. 24 2009 at 3:29 pm
lolsmileyface(= SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
be yourself and nobody else

OMG I LOVE IT YOUR TALENTED IM NEW IM WAITING UNTIL THEY APROVE MY POEMS BUT WWHEN THEY DO CAN YOU READ IT


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