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October 26, 2009
When teenage drama hurt her
And friends were gained or lost
You saved her from the madness,
Were there whate’er the cost.

She loves you, oh, so dearly;
You are her closest friend!
Because you will, quite clearly,
Be with her ‘til the end.

With grown-up problems thick’ning
And debts she could not pay –
With cheating boyfriends quick’ning
Her jealousy’s delay,

You brought relief so quickly,
Your comfort to her heart –
Whenever it feels sickly
You take away the smart.

When old age makes her feeble,
Crippled and alone,
Her need for you will treble,
Oh faithful one, her own.

When her last breath is going,
She hopes to hold you near;
Always, ever knowing
Her chocolate is here.

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scientificmusician said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 9:10 pm
btw, who took that picture, cuz it's beautiful!
The_Erstwhile_Pedestrian replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:54 am
Isn't it? Some person in New England apparently took it, and it seemed to fit the, eh, contemplative mood I was in.
btw thx for reading! u totally need to post some of your stuff!
scientificmusician said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 8:56 pm
haha! i love this! it's so true, too. :P
lgrs_88 said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 9:02 pm
Hahaha. That's a fantastic poem, a great twist at the end. I love it! And, for the record, I'm a girl, and I agree!! :)
The_Erstwhile_Pedestrian replied...
Nov. 4, 2009 at 8:20 am
Thanks for reading! You know, it's funny but a lot of guys feel exactly the same way. We just won't admit it!
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