Fight MAG

By Anonymous

   I cry at night

Hoping to fight

The pain

I cry at night

Hoping to fight

The sadness

I cry at night

Hoping to fight

The weakness

But when I cry at night

I cannot fight

The madness

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on Feb. 21 2012 at 9:19 pm
bandgeekfreak DIAMOND, No Answer, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write, if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself.” Abraham Maslow.

 I can really relate to this because this is what I feel most nights. It takes a lot to write about this stuff, so whoever you are you are really brave and thank you so much for writing this. It makes me remember that I'm not alone. 

Noly314 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 11:27 am
Noly314 BRONZE, Long Grove, Illinois
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Your poem had a good concept and while it's simplicity lent itself to the concept, it still lacks any sort of imagery to pull reader's into the moment. Don't just tell us about your pain, make us feel it. Bring us into the moment with strong imagery so that we don't just read how you fight, but so that we know how you fight

on Mar. 15 2009 at 2:39 am
i understand y u didnt put your name it isnt easy being mad because your sad weak and in pain.i know.i sometimes cry myself to sleep fighting.i loved your poem it was very simple and relatable. i hope you come to a point in your life when you can stop fighting


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