Hey You... MAG

By Anonymous

   I don't quite know

who

you

are,

but in my eyes you

are

a

star.

Not of the movies or

the

silver

screens,

but of my heart and

of

my

dreams.





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ohdear BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2011 at 9:38 pm
ohdear BRONZE, Tacoma, Washington
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I really love this poem. It's so cute and simple :) I agree with Zwidon. The spacing really helps.

Zwidon said...
on May. 24 2011 at 12:44 am
Zwidon, Encinitas, California
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I love how you use the spacing to create a cadance. It transofrms a simple poem into something that kind of manages to permeate one's mind because it is just enough unexpected.


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