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The Empty Heart

October 20, 2009
By sorrowkid BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
sorrowkid BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
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"Don't push the river it flows"- Ciziz Zyke Oro


There a spot that was left empty when you left. I felt like there was nothing that could fill that spot. The heart ach just built as the hole began to grow bigger. I feel as if I was left out in the cold. No warmth left within my soul. As I watch you leave the thought of you coming back was just a dream. Soon as you return I will be free from the pain and suffering that you cause in this empty heart of mines. The warmth will return and the smile will once be back on my face. Until that day I will still feel empty. The sorrow builds and once you are back if we work together we can fix this empty spot that is placed inside my lonely heart.

The author's comments:
The fact that one of my friends has left was the inspiration. I hope people can learn that even if there is a smile on someones face there is pain inside them.

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 9:08 pm
Thank you for you repsonse

unitedfront said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 7:59 pm
This is a touching poem. Kudos to the author.