Knife MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   I'm holding the knife

like I would hold a pen.

Everytime

that I go to write

I just keep cutting the paper.





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on Nov. 3 2011 at 11:20 pm
alilove10 BRONZE, Hermosa Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Madness in great ones must not unwatched go"

I really enjoyed your poem because of how you broke it up and how you start with a simile that turns into the implied metaphor of the second part.  There are two simple parts to this poem, but it makes for a powerful image.  Love it.  I get that sense of frusteration.


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