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Goodbye

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You left me here all alone
you left me here on the phone.
I'm sitting here on my bed
thinking about what you said.
I am leaving here very soon
I will not be back until another noon
As a pack away my clothes
I notice on my window a bright red rose.
I read the colorful card
I read on but it starts to get hard
It mentions all the times we had
All the good and all the bad.
I read all the way to the car.
and i say to my self you couldn't of gotten far.
So i run and run to track you down
I yell and scream but nothing makes a sound.
The fog is rushing around my face
I bend over to tie my lace.
When i look back up i see a figure
It came closer and started to get bigger.
I asked who it was but no one would answer
I couldn't see the face is was all a blur.
Then i felt the thing touch me.
Then i could actually see.
It was you their holding me tight.
You were their to protect me from the cold dark night.





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PurpleMidnight said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 9:41 pm
Wow! This was an amazingly emotional poem. I love it. Never stop writing. :)
 
spitfire213 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 1:01 pm
really descriptive and moving. i like it a lot!
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 7:46 am
Beautiful work. It's kinda sad in the beginning but it gets happier in the end. I can feel everything that is happening. Good job. =]
 
jayyxxkayy said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 7:25 am
wow! this is a great poem!
so meaningful
great job!
 
allmostfamous said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 11:14 pm
wow this poem is amazing! so powerful i <3 it!
 
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