October 18, 2009
By Anonymous

You left me here all alone
you left me here on the phone.
I'm sitting here on my bed
thinking about what you said.
I am leaving here very soon
I will not be back until another noon
As a pack away my clothes
I notice on my window a bright red rose.
I read the colorful card
I read on but it starts to get hard
It mentions all the times we had
All the good and all the bad.
I read all the way to the car.
and i say to my self you couldn't of gotten far.
So i run and run to track you down
I yell and scream but nothing makes a sound.
The fog is rushing around my face
I bend over to tie my lace.
When i look back up i see a figure
It came closer and started to get bigger.
I asked who it was but no one would answer
I couldn't see the face is was all a blur.
Then i felt the thing touch me.
Then i could actually see.
It was you their holding me tight.
You were their to protect me from the cold dark night.

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on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:41 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Wow! This was an amazingly emotional poem. I love it. Never stop writing. :)

on Oct. 25 2009 at 1:01 pm
spitfire213 SILVER, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In the devil's den i may be, so stab my heart and set me free.

really descriptive and moving. i like it a lot!

on Oct. 22 2009 at 7:46 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Beautiful work. It's kinda sad in the beginning but it gets happier in the end. I can feel everything that is happening. Good job. =]

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on Oct. 22 2009 at 7:25 am
jayyxxkayy, New City, New York
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wow! this is a great poem!

so meaningful

great job!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 11:14 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

wow this poem is amazing! so powerful i <3 it!


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