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Three Words

October 15, 2009
By simplephon BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
simplephon BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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I can see your smile
Away from a mile
From top of the hill
Waiting for me still

I ran with my bare feet
Along the long lonely street
Thinking, when we meet
Again, my heart will beat!

I ran fast as a deer
While shouting, hoping you can hear
From the top of the hill
Where you waited for me still

The three words that I held so dear
And hoped only for you to hear
The three words that is long over due,
I Love You



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ONWstudent said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 10:27 pm
Really sweet and awesome. =)

One thing to point out quickly grammar-wise

"The three words that is long overdue" --> "The three words that ARE long overdue".

Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar nazi. ;)