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Are you serious?!?!?

All this stuff you tell me
Do you really mean it?
Or are you just playing
With my emotions, just
Like all the rest of the jerks.
I thought you was different

You call me at one in
The morning, after a night
Of kicking it with your friends
Just to remind me that you
Could have had sex tonight
If you had wanted

You walk up to me and
Wrap your arms around
My waist, but you smile
At the pretty girl walking
Past saying what’s up sexy!
Are you serious?

You talk about how you wanna
Spend the rest of your life with me,
But I hear from other people that
You’re e-mailing other girls saying
You can’t wait to kick it with them
This weekend.

Well this time I am dead
Serious!! I am sick and tired
Of being played by guys I
Think are different. If you are
Serious each time you say I love you
Then prove it!!!!!



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Springer10 said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 12:46 pm
Ya I have already found an amazing guy who makes me feel like no other guy has. This loser lost my love forever
 
Rapture-Rey said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 5:34 pm
awww :/ i now how ya feel hun, i just got out of a relationship of 11 months...planning on going to college together and what not, its okay though :D life will get better...i promise ;]
 
hhghgg said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 11:25 am
man this some lame stuff all yaw ust thirsty over these boys
 
Springer10 replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 8:46 am
I do not appreciate you leaving rude comments on something I wrote. Those are my feelings and I don't care if you dont like them but please keep them to yourself. Thanks
 
Springer10 said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 7:58 am
Ya and just remeber that if you were meant to be together, it will work out
 
heaven said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:32 am
i totslly agrre i just got hurt and dumped on 10-19-09 and im still hurt but i still love him i just have to no that if hes happy im happy and thats what counts and its my time to be happy(:
 
dylonmichael said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 11:00 am
love the poem
 
Springer10 said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:24 am
LLol thx you guys:) I'm not very good at poetry so your feedback is appreciated
 
Kathryn T. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 2:57 pm
You are really good at poetry because all it is...is writing what you feel. Know that some guys are like this, but i promise there's hope out there.
 
Sara-Zee said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 12:30 am
And how many good guys are getting played by stupid girls?
Maybe we should just staple papers to everyone's forehead that say 'player' or 'stay here'. That would make everything easier.
Great poem and great point.
 
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 11:00 am
it probably would but how should i know i have never been in a relationship well ones thats worth counting. i am gay and yes i have tried dating girls but i dont know if i can count them as relationships but i have never dated a guy i have been close many times but for some reason they pull back so i say screw them
 
BradleyCounts said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 11:18 pm
Good poem.....there are a few mess ups.....Yeah most guys are jerks...But there are still a few of us good ones out there...
 
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 5:35 pm
Awesome poem. And very true. I think it could use a bit of rewording, but it's an excellent point. How many girls out there are getting played by stupid guys?
 
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