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I wish we could just for once let go of reality and just dance the night away with his arms wrapped around me......

We're so close I can hear the long deep breaths he's taking,I think he's nervous,I think I forgot how to breathe,I never want these feelings to leave......

But now we're back to reality and I mean simply nothing at all to him. NOTHING.



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shes_a_tee_ex_babeh_899 said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 4:51 pm:
yo:)) i loved it!! loved the concept of it, great lil poem!
 
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SilentXSonya said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 2:20 pm:
Free verse, yes? :D
 
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livelovewrite98 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 2:48 pm:
i like it but it's not one of my favorite ones
 
kennedy_rowzz replied...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 2:57 pm :
thanx I dont really like it that much either its just okay not my best work:(
<3
 
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