Promise MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   Promise

It feels perfect,
the promise
of icy kisses
placed on shivering
white wrists
It only brings
bloody flowers
lying,
dying,
on sad silver graves.
The only thing it leaves
is the oblivion
of spinning in
unbrokencircles.
Forever
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by R. D., E. Hartford, CT







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