Feelings Felt

October 9, 2009
By Cierra BRONZE, Woodinville, Washington
Cierra BRONZE, Woodinville, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 1 comment

I felt like no one wanted me, like no one was ever there
I felt like no one would find me, like no one would care
But here you come, out of the blue and I can’t breathe
Do even know what it is that you do to me?
You say “hey” and my heart skips a beat
You say “I love you” and I want our lips to meet
I want to hold you close, and never let you go
I want to do so many things, I want you to know
All that I am feeling and all that I want to give
You’re the reason I wake up in the morning, the reason that I live
You’re the reason I’ve changed the way I breathe, the way I sleep
I hope that you want me like I want you to hold and to keep
I’ve been down this road before and I want this time to be for real
Oh, my love if only you could know, how much you make me feel
I’m going to try and show you in every way that I can
I’ve never done anything before never even held a guy’s hand
I’m so scared, but I’m excited to
Just to be able to show you
I’m making up games in my head, and making up a scenario
Of what we’re going to do, and how our meet up is going to go
I think about it before I fall asleep and so you’re in my dreams
I just want to make all of this real, make my own love scene
So come to me and let me show you just what I can do
Come to me and feel just how much I love you

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This article has 4 comments.

Cierra BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 12:54 pm
Cierra BRONZE, Woodinville, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 1 comment
Thank you so much! :D

on Dec. 6 2009 at 10:36 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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wow.. just wow. This is pure awesome!! Great rhyming and the words.. just.. i LOVE it !! (:

Cierra said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 5:46 pm
Thank you so much =)

on Nov. 6 2009 at 10:54 am
xxjosiexx143 SILVER, Lexington Twp., Maine
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This is good, I like it. =]


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